monkey_artist_300

Lines

For the first exercise I think you struggled to have confident line and I think you may have tried to perform the strokes slowly rather than with a confident flowing stroke , but you did take your time perform the super imposed lines without fraying so that is good to see.

For the ghosted lines exercise I see that you have tried to be creative within the exercise which is good to see that you enjoying (read lesson zero ), however it would be best if you refrain from doing so and focus all your attention on performing the task to the best of your ability.(wobbly strokes were also visible here)

For the final exercise it is good to see that you filled all the space within your page the same problem as with the prior exercises.

My suggestion would be you read lesson zero then go to the pages explaining each exercise and redo the three exercises make sure you read through the text thoroughly before redoing the tasks and watch the videos too, maybe also read the using your arm section as well.

Thank you, for taking your time to evalute my work, I will take your advice.

Thanks for the reviewing my work,Im going to move on to the next lesson now, but I want to know if my work on the organic perspective task was alright Im thinking of doing the 250 box challenge , do you think thats a good idea?

Copy the link (as in the web address of the post) and paste it on to the web images adress space on the submit homework submissions page. But I think you should finish all the tasks in lessson 1 to post the homework otherwise it gets put in the sketchbook.