6:57 PM, Saturday June 13th 2020
You need to do 250 boxes challenge before lesson 2.
You have big ellipse problems, mainly deformed and too imprecise. I suggest to put them in your warmup, described in the faq under this one
In rough perspective, you were supposed to extend the lines only to the horizon.
Your lines are very smooth, straight and confident, but I see some fraying on the beginning side of the superimposed lines. Take your time to reposition the pen on the paper.
The site needs reviewer. I suggest if you have the time to give back to the community by doing some reviews like the ones I do on my profile or at least some similar to the guide
The review you first received was definitely too concise