Zeragamba

Great job on all the exercises there, especially that Rotated boxes one.

You may want to practice the Ghosted lines a bit more to help with stopping right on the finishing point, but it's still a successful exercise there.

Just a heads up, it looks like you were using a ballpoint pen in the first few sheets. For this lesson that's ok, but in future lessons a 0.5 black fineliner is required.

Awesome thanks!

I have done a couple of reviews of other's submissions, but haven't had a lot of time to do that between work, other hobbies, and drawing :)

And ya, rotated boxes was a challenge to complete.

I would recommend getting a black fineliner pen to avoid future confusion. The green marker reads as a ballpoint pen.

Thanks! I've been doing ghosted lines as part of my warm ups :)

For drawing lines, yep, rotate the page to make it the easiest the draw the line, and the same goes for ellipses

Welcome! First impressions of the homeworks looks like you've got the core concepts, however before you move on, you should get a fineliner ink pen to use. (See https://drawabox.com/article/ink) Using a ballpoint pen is an exception for lesson 1.

Lines

• Ghosted planes are missing the cross lines, but non-the less your lines are nice and confidant :)

Ellipses

• Nicely controlled tables of ellipses, and looks like you nailed the rest of the exercises for this section

Boxes

• On rotated boxes, your boxes don't look be rotating (https://drawabox.com/lesson/1/16/notrotating). Probably will need to try that one again

• Organic perspective and rough perspective look pretty good to me though.

Greetings, and welcome back!

Lines

• Great lines, and looks you've got this part down pat :)

Ellipses

• You should look to only go around the ellipse twice at most, but you look to have nice confident lines

Boxes

• In your Rough Perspectives, your first, forth, and last frames are great. Might be good to try those ones again as warm ups in future sessions, but it's something that the 250 box challenge will drill into you a bit.

All in all, looks great to me, and I think you're ready to move onto the challenge.

Greetings! Welcome to the course!

Superimposed lines

• Looks like you're letting your brain drive, and not your muscles (https://drawabox.com/comic/1)

• You should be moving quickly through the lines to create a single smooth line each time (https://drawabox.com/lesson/1/8/wobbling). It's ok to overshoot, but trying to stop exactly in the same spot isn't the goal of this exercise.

Ghosted Lines

• Same comments as Superimposed Lines

• Here it's still ok to overshoot. Ending your line at the right point will just come to you in time.

Ghosted Planes

• The density of boxes looks good :)

• Same wobbling lines as the other exercises

Table of Ellipses

• The ellipses look good, though one of the things for the exercise is to try and redraw the same ellipse of the same size in each box.

• You did a good job of positioning the ellipses :)

• The Second Page? (album is backwards, one with 8 boxes) looks a lot better

Ellipses on Planes

• Those are looking really good, but your brain is still driving.

Funnels

• Remember to draw through your ellipses at least twice.

• The ellipses should be getting wider the further out from the center

Plotted Proportion

• Whoops, this exercise is a special one where the whole thing is supposed to be done with a ruler or straight edge (https://drawabox.com/lesson/1/14/video)

• More boxes of different sizes would be good.

Rough Proportion

• Page needs to be split into thirds, and 4-6 boxes in each.

• Use a ruler to draw lines back to the horizon extending the ones you drew

Now for the fun ones...

Rotated Boxes

• Looks like you only did 45 degrees worth of boxes. One or more on each axis would get you to the full 90

• You should draw through your boxes (x-ray vision to see the lines on the other side of the boxes) (https://drawabox.com/lesson/1/16/notdrawingthrough)

• Boxes are too far apart (https://drawabox.com/lesson/1/16/guessing)

Organic Perspective

• Page needs to be split into thirds