Verounsen

thanks a lot for the critique, rob! :)

yes, I'll try boxes with less dramatic foreshortening in my warm ups!

have a nice day

vera

hi there

yeah, of course. somewhere on the site it's recommended that you do 15min warmup everytime before you draw. so: continue with the box challenge and every day before you draw boxes you take one of the exercises of lesson 1 and practice for a bit. do not grind lesson one, you don't have to be perfect to continue!

hi zero

i think you should advance to the next lesson, the 250 box challenge. and mayba if you want - do some more of the funnels exercice before you start. because that's the only page that look a bit unfilled to me from your homework.

all the other exercices you did pretty good!

the organic perspective exercise looks a bit less confident than your other lines! so take your time for every line when you go on.

have fun :)

Hi Quad

Your ghosted lines are a bit different from the other approaches. But you seem to have fun and that's what matters.

You did a really nice job on the rotated boxes challenge and this one is not easy to keep as round.

A bit more variation at the last organic perspectives would be nice but I guess you'll be have a lot of experiencing with boxes at the 250 Box Challenge.

Have fun!

Hey Lebobbe

Your lines in the rough perspective got a bit more wobbly than before where you concentrated on one line only.

Your rotated boxes look really nice!

And then in the plotted perspective at the end it looks a bit rushed, so I guess you will learn a lot by doing the 250 Box Challenge.

Cheers!

hi ducarte

your lines in the rough perspective got a bit more wobbly than before where you concentrated on one line only.

but i think you did a great job overall and can go on to the next step - the 250 box challenge.

take your time, there. I just was in 250 box challenge and it took me over a month to complete.

good luck!

hi wombutt

I think your straight lines are fine. they are not yet perfect but that's ok. we all need to practice.

with the plotted perspective your lines are getting a bit rounder, were you hurrying through or just did not ghost the lines enough? I guess this happens with a lot of people, me included ;)

mhm you got a bit of a mess in the rotated boxes, I looked at mine like at a inner and a outer ball, don't know if this makes sense.

your perspective boxes: they have very little variation. if you look at the example homework and pay attention to how he did the Y-s you can see a lot more variation in angles. and you may draw even bigger boxes and overlap them and go a bit crazy.

overall you did a good job and I think you don't have to do more perspective boxes because the 250 box challenge will give you the opportunity to dive a lot more into the subject :D cya there

uh you have 100! nice, i'm in my 70ies still (havent uploaded them for a few days)

hah! yes the opposite Y has to be over 90° you're right... :) but when i'm trying to construct the boxes i never looked at this, i just tried to get about two sides of the vanishing point right and the third was always off.. but i think i'm getting better now.

hi david!

i think overall your line quality is really good :)

on the rough perspective exercise you rushed a bit through (like me! if you click on my critique for lesson 1 you will see). your boxes will get better a lot once you start the 250 boxes challenge...

cya there!

thanks a lot for the y-generator, ericna! :)