TeslaDharma

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Thank you so much for your critique! I attempted the organic box exercise. I tried really hard not to sketch over lines too much. I want to correct all of my lines when I see they're off a bit is my problem. And you're absolutely right, it draws so much more attention to it. I'll work avoid doing this.

And, responding to your question about rough perspective exercise: no, I didn't use a ruler until drawing the box edges toward the horizon line.

Ellipses are not my friend, but I'll keep practicing to get that smooth confident swoop.

I fear you may have not fully read/watched/listened to the lesson instructions and explanations

Overall, great execution.

Rough perspective exercise; I see a pattern of weak lines. Perhaps some of the boxes were drawn at the elbow? Maybe the lines were marked without ghosting?

I'm led to believe the table of ellipses exercises were drawn without much ghosting. A number of the ellipses have sharp corners. The ellipses in planes, a few do not make enough contact with the edges of the planes.

I like the way you darkened some of the lines in the organic boxes exercise.

The first line exercise: you did a great job maintaining the starting position with your marks. The lines could be drawn with more confidence I think. I see a bit of wobble throughout.

The ellipse work was executed very well.

Organic boxes exercise: I struggled with this bit myself for quite a while. The vanishing points for many of your boxes in this exercise are not consistent which leads to the warped appearance.

Great execution. Appears to have followed the instructions. I enjoyed seeing how the boxes transformed the closer to 250 you reached.

Lovely! I see your strokes become more and more confident with each exercise.

The plotted perspective exercise was hard to review as the boxes were large and all clumped around the same area.

Majority of line-work looks to have been drawn at the shoulder, great job.

I can see confidence was lost as you began the organic exercise and some strokes were drawn at the elbow or wrist.

Ellipses appear clear and concise.

It appears that maybe you may have rushed through a few of the exercises here.

Ellipses in general do not fit within the directed spaces; they're either too small or too large, or do not connect with the drawn bounds.

The single vanishing point/rough perspective exercise was performed incorrectly. We're not plotting lines to the vanishing point, instead to the horizon. Please review this exercise again.

Nicely done. I can see you took your time and planned your marks.

The organic box exercises lost a bit of the confidence seen in previous exercises. But with each page, the pen strokes show improvement.