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5:19 PM, Thursday June 16th 2022
Overall, great execution.
Rough perspective exercise; I see a pattern of weak lines. Perhaps some of the boxes were drawn at the elbow? Maybe the lines were marked without ghosting?
I'm led to believe the table of ellipses exercises were drawn without much ghosting. A number of the ellipses have sharp corners. The ellipses in planes, a few do not make enough contact with the edges of the planes.
I like the way you darkened some of the lines in the organic boxes exercise.
Next Steps:
Hold onto your technique as you move forward to the next lesson. Give yourself time to stage your marks with ghosting.
5:49 PM, Thursday June 16th 2022
Hi!
Wasn't shure what kind of feedback could be on this level, but your vision became really useful.
I agree with all of your observations.
Thank you for your time and attentiveness.
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