I see the improve! Your lines aren't wobbly and you do it with confidence, You are ready to move to 250 boxes challenge!
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Its pretty good for being the first one!
Most of your lines have confidence and you dont chicken scratch or try to fix it by drawing over it, although some of your ghost lines are a bit wobbly same in plotted perspective.
Also, some of the ellipses dont touch the four sides of the planes, but its okay after all, I think you are ready to move
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The super imposed lines Had some issues, most of your lines are wobbly and lack of confidence and they don't fray at the end.
Same with ghosted lines, some are wobbly you need to draw with more confidence plan your marks
As for the planes and Ellipses, most of them dont touch the 4 sides of the planes as the excercises so they are out of place
In the table of ellipses you are supposed to not leave blank spaces, which you did, you have to fill them with smaller ellipses, but the rest is fine
Funnels and plotted perspective are well done! But your boxes in rough perspective and distorted and your lines are wobbly but you'll do better boxes in the challenge but you can't ignore the lack of ghosting in your lines!
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1 page of super impossed lines
1 page of ghosted lines
You seem to do pretty good for a first attemp.
Your super impossed lines are good not wobbly and drawn with confidence wich means you understood pretty good the excercises! Same with the ghosted lines.
The planes and ellipses are also fine i see sometimes yo try to correct your lines which I dont recomend but keep practicing, remember to ghost your lines
Funnels are fine the ellipses match with the axis
Plotted perspective y pretty good!
But in rough perspective seems you had a difficult time some boxes are distorted but you'll get to practice your boxes in the challenge and its not meant to be perfect, good luck
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Not bad but here are some issues and tips
The superimposed lines are most fine, a bit more of ghosting lines would help
The ghosted lines are all too wobbly, and there are too little lines for a page, in think you rushed your lines too much
About the ghosted planes and ellipses, some of them dont touch the sides of the planes
The tables of ellipses are fine
The funnels arent consistent with perspective and some of them are all the same leght
Plotted perspective its fine as for rotated boxes and organic perspective
In rough perspective your boxes present some distortion and the perspective doesn't match, try ghosting your lines and pay attention to the vanishing points, dont make innecesary lines or you'll get confused
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Get ready for the 250 boxes challenge my friend, you'll have to read the perspective lesson many times but you'll get it
Actually some excercises are good for a first time! I would recomend you to ghost your marks better and make more confident strokes, there are lots of wobbly lines in the super impossed lines, ghosted lines and rough perspective, but I can see more confident lines in the rest, try to take your time to plan your marks.
The table of ellipses is correct except for some chicken scratch and you drew some ellipses out of the margin
Same happend with the plains with ellipses, most of the ellipses dont touch the 4 for sides of the plane
Some of your boxes in rough perspective are a little distorted and wobbly, try to follow the lines of the vanishing point
Rotated boxes its kind of difficult, but you are supposed to use the square draw tho the sides that's where you start
Organic perspective its fine
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2 pages of ellipses in planes
1 page of ghosting lines
Thanks for the critique! Now I see it clearer, I still practicing and struggling mostly bc those were the first times, I am trying to ghost more my lines, I will practice the ghosting lines more since my pulse is kind of weak and my hand trembles sometimes.
The exercises are all in ink as you say, I used a pen since fineliners are kind of expensive here where I come from.
didn't understand de last one but here it is, I tried to make it spheric and rotated I read it many times but I don't understand at all ;;
[]Homework drawabox https://imgur.com/a/UcgqfyK
thank you! here it is
This recommendation is really just for those of you who've reached lesson 6 and onwards.
I haven't found the actual brand you buy to matter much, so you may want to shop around. This one is a "master" template, which will give you a broad range of ellipse degrees and sizes (this one ranges between 0.25 inches and 1.5 inches), and is a good place to start. You may end up finding that this range limits the kinds of ellipses you draw, forcing you to work within those bounds, but it may still be worth it as full sets of ellipse guides can run you quite a bit more, simply due to the sizes and degrees that need to be covered.
No matter which brand of ellipse guide you decide to pick up, make sure they have little markings for the minor axes.
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