10:27 AM, Friday November 12th 2021
Thank you very much for the critique.
I appreciate it a
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BluAir
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10:47 PM, Thursday November 11th 2021
Hi, this is the Lesson 2 redo.
(sorry it took too long, was kinda busy these days)
11:15 PM, Monday November 8th 2021
So edit them into the same Imgur page? or make a new submission?
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11:06 PM, Monday November 8th 2021
for the 3D Arrows exercise, I would say you have a good understanding of 3D Arrows. But some of the lines appear to be repeated and some of them do not overlap, take as much time needed to plan and ghost the lines to keep confident, and overlapping
Some of the Contour lines in the Organic Forms exercise aren't drawn confidently, they have a bit of wobbliness towards them. Its recommended to take as much time as needed to execute the line confidently through the ghosting method (as mentioned above). Also some lines in the form intersections as well.
In the first page of Organic forms, two of the forms are a bit too complex, Try to imagine two identical sized balls on either end. (https://d15v304a6xpq4b.cloudfront.net/lesson_images/4213ce18.jpg)
Everyone experiences a burnout, its good that you still managed to complete the lesson (Kudos to you)
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Move onto Lesson 3
7:24 PM, Monday November 8th 2021
By Revise you mean I have to do them all over again (the exercises mentioned)? or just continue from where I left off?
(Sorry but am just confused)
9:46 PM, Sunday November 7th 2021
Just tried the Your own critic advice, helps massively.
thank you so much for the advice and taking time out of your day to give me a critique, I really appreciate it :)
4:58 PM, Sunday November 7th 2021
thank you so much for the critique, I appreciate it
How do you plan more carefully (sorry if this is a dumb question)
4:45 PM, Sunday November 7th 2021
Thank you so much for giving this a critique (I didn't receive a notification for it, am sorry if this is late)
Can you further elaborate on the Boxes part, I don't understand what you mean exactly
and as always, thank you for giving this a critique :)
P.S: I have done the 250 boxes challenge too.
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