5:44 PM, Sunday April 25th 2021
I can't submit 25 wheel challenge, i think lesson 6 wasn't marked as complete
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Ayami
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4:15 PM, Monday November 30th 2020
About dog:
I see that the dog's head is pointing in the wrong direction, and I also drew the neck too wide, so there is no room for the chest, but i had to push it
8:19 AM, Monday November 30th 2020
3:33 PM, Monday November 23rd 2020
12:50 PM, Friday October 9th 2020
I apologize, i didn't ignore anything, i understood it wrong, first image in this post explains how i understood it for the first time, first image in row - how i understood it then, second - how i understand it now
10:50 PM, Sunday October 4th 2020
11:45 PM, Monday September 28th 2020
I'm not sure if I understood correctly the third paragraph about negative space. Briefly how I understood it: If i stick to simplified version of this shape , then my leg positions will be better.
Did you mean that?
10:35 PM, Monday August 10th 2020
Before drawing these two additional insect drawings i read your critique again for a few times and wrote out my mistakes and kept them in head when i drew, but i still see some of them in last drawings
Like bad proportions, skinny legs and scratchy marks when i'm trying to add line weight to the front forms so viewer can understand which form is closer
About scratchy marks: when i try to add line weight i fail a bit and try to mask it but it turns out even worse, so that's one more mistake
I understand that critique for all lessons takes a lot of your time and people like me take even more, I am ashamed of myself
8:45 PM, Tuesday August 4th 2020
about a smiley face, it made me laugh, haha
Here are two more drawings: https://imgur.com/a/WIVWy4t
I'm sorry for redoing my first drawing
10:08 AM, Saturday June 27th 2020
Now i understand what i had to do and how to approach this kind of problem in future, thank you for your critique and further explanation
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