Here ya go. Some are far worse then others and remember to stick to basic shapes was a bit hard and i probably failed a few times. But i think one of the papers was okay.
I learnt a lot/had to rethink some stuff and i think i am on the path to improvment. Take your time
Hey yeah! These branches are a great improvement!
With the first page of plants i see slight improvement. i want to start with the 3rd plant and this is something i just realized now but, what if you started with a leaf for a base shape? this way you can make it fold easier and have something to start with. I can't seem to recall the flower name but i do recognize it.
The potted plants themselves look really solid! Don't forget when you make the pot that you use it like a cylinder starting with a minor axis. It helps a lot with alignment. The second plant seems to be missing some construction at the top but other than that, looking good.
Second page also is a great improvement.
I think the horizontal flower is a rose? It looks good but i think it would've really sold it if you started with a cone like shape
third page and ooohh~ what mushroom is that? It looks fantasy like. Construction looks pretty good. I am noticing here that ellipses look a bit same-ish and the shroom is missing a minor axis but other than that, not bad.
With the final page i see the same-ish ellipses but a lot more confidence and you nailed the bottom left plant other than that part. With the big right plant i saw you forgot to add the forking branch.
I see that the branches themselves were a vast improvement but you forgot the twists and turns they do in the plants. Don't get me wrong, the constructions are not half bad!
Keep an eye out for those and you'll be good.
I hope you're ready for lesson 4 :)
Next Steps:
I still see some hiccups but i'm confident those will reduce as you keep practising.
I hope you're not uncomfortable for insects.
Good luck!
Thanks! Long way to go but good i am on the right path. I will keep practicing leaves and branches in warmup and do plants now and then.
Thank you! I will move on to l4. Seems fun. Will post some time and i hope you will join me and give me your helpfull critiuqe.
Good luck wtih your own proejcts!
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