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6:13 PM, Monday February 15th 2021

These are soo much better. I'm extremely pleased with the specificity of the constructions, especially when it comes to how you've handled your curves. While you didn't necessarily block out all the straight/flat planes first, then curve them out, it's very clear that these calculations were being done in your head much moreso than they were previously, resulting in more intentional surfaces. As a result, both of these cars look extremely solid and believable. Excellent work.

I am happy to mark this lesson as complete, and with it the entire course. Congratulations!

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7:24 PM, Monday February 15th 2021

Thank you very very much again!!! I am very happy, that i have done this course (there is still one challange to master).

This is my last longer "additional" massage to you, as i realized, that i have streched your attention to the limit and that you ve way to much to do. I know it for myself pretty well, how 24/7 feels, although you love your work (as i probably mentioned, i am from a theaterbackground...)

I will move on to other courses, but i am still planing to do drawabox at least 2 more times (i will not write so long massages and questions again!!)

So i have a few friends, that i hopefully convinced to do this course. I hope, that i can give back at a point! Maybe i am doing a review after i have finished my thired time. When i do it, i will send you a preview, so you can tell me, if you like it, or not...

so! Thanks again man! Its realy a great side and you're a great teacher and observer. There are even some things you said, that i can transfer to my own proffession. Ihope that you keep doing it!!

Paul

8:00 PM, Monday February 15th 2021

I'm always happy to have people review my course - even if they have negative things to say, as long as it's constructive, it ultimately all gets factored in when I decide what the next steps I wish to take will be. As you may have noticed - I have a habit of revising the content every year or two, because there's always things that can be improved.

Anyway, best of luck!

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