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11:20 PM, Thursday June 23rd 2022

Sure

https://imgur.com/B7ysP7X

https://imgur.com/fUIEAu

Here is another one that may be useful too

https://imgur.com/f6TMEk8

12:02 AM, Friday June 24th 2022

I think those were deleted. They still don't load. That's alright, though.

1:31 AM, Friday June 24th 2022

No problem I'll try to send them to your associated discord account

1:30 AM, Friday June 24th 2022

Mo problem I'll try yo send them to your associated discord account

10:49 PM, Tuesday June 28th 2022

Alright, I did the exercises: https://imgur.com/a/UAhPmXJ. Thanks for your patience.

4:49 PM, Wednesday June 29th 2022

Okay

Starting with the organic intersections, I think you are moving in the right direction and these are turning out better than the previous ones. I have one suggestion to keep pushing this exercise further and that is to think about the sausages as balloons filled with water, try to think about how they say and slump under the force of gravity, there are a few sausages that seem to bend upwards which makes them feel unnatural. Also, keep working on having each sausage equally sized, you still are drawing a big sausage first and then adding a bunch of smaller ones on top of it.

-Moving on to the animals I think you are moving in the right direction, there are still a few things that you can keep working on and that I wrote on the original critique. The main thing I want to suggest is that you should keep pushing this exercises further, like drawing the internal masses that do not directly affect the silhouette, and trying to push the head construction even further as shown in the demos I sent you. You can keep working on all these issues by yourself ,I'll go ahead and mark this lesson as complete, good luck!!

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