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5:43 PM, Wednesday July 6th 2022

These still suffer from a lack of confidence, and rushing (your hatching isn't evenly spaced) at times and your lines still break quite often.

These are issues that I brought up in your critique and specifically pointed to needing to be addressed so I'll be asking you to redo these pages.

This is covered in the markmaking section I linked to previously but here it is again for convenience.

I recommend that you not rush to get your revisions done, but rather take the time to absorb what has been shared with you in this critique, review the materials I've referenced, and generally allow that information to sink in, which does not happen immediately.

Next Steps:

  • 1 page of organic forms with contours

  • 1 page of form intersections

When finished, reply to this critique with your revisions.
1:28 AM, Thursday July 7th 2022

https://imgur.com/a/JT1jkCk

This time i tried to press my pen more firmly so lines didnt break, and i tried to take more time with things like the hatching and the exercises in general.

7:40 PM, Thursday July 7th 2022

While there's still room for growth (your hatching is still not evenly spaced and there's still wobbling occuring at times) these are definitely an improvement and your extra pressure resulted in complete lines rather than lines that were half visible. Good work.

As long as you continue to be mindful of following the instructions from previous and future exercises I have no doubt you'll continue to improve so I'll be marking your submission complete.

Keep practicing previous exercises as warm ups and good luck in the next lesson.

Next Steps:

Move on to lesson 3.

This critique marks this lesson as complete.
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