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9:46 PM, Monday March 14th 2022

Thank you for looking over my work!!

Sorry I'm just now getting to uploading the two pages but c'est la vie.

https://imgur.com/a/sqK1gbp

9:28 AM, Tuesday March 15th 2022
edited at 12:29 AM, Mar 17th 2022

Table of Ellipses

  • Your ellipses are still wobbly here.

  • Remember to prioritize executing them with confidence first and not worry too much about accuracy

Ellipses on Planes

  • Your ellipses are still wobbly here as well, but it looks a bit better than the ones on your submission.

Things to remember when you practice these exercises:

  • Prioritize drawing with confidence first. When I saw your ellipses on planes, you seem hesitant when you execute your ellipses, and it looked like you drew them a bit slowly to make the ellipse touch the borders of the plane. Drawing slowly will make your ellipses look wobbly.

  • You should draw from your shoulder, draw with your whole arm, use the ghosting method, and draw through your ellipses 2-3 times. Doing these things will help you execute smooth ellipses. (Things to Remember: https://youtu.be/gyRHkTPqfrQ)

  • Don’t worry too much about accuracy. Don't worry if your ellipses didn't touch all the borders of the plane because it will get better with practice. What matters most right now is to practice executing your marks with confidence and less hesitation.

Next Steps:

Proceed to 250 box challenge.

Good luck!

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edited at 12:29 AM, Mar 17th 2022
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