sarah396

hello, thank you for the critique, i have a bit of a problem when it comes to textures as you mentioned and i see that in hindsight that i have rushed or simplify thing but when i draw the subject i feel or think that its enough which it isnt because you point it out ( i think that every lesson should be practice a lot to the point that it becomes our second nature for us, before moving on but that will prolong the learning period as we are all eager to move on to the next lesson and finish the course) i will go through lesson 2 again before moving on to lesson 7,

as for for the wheels that i did i was only able to find one ellipse guide so wheels 3,5,6 were free hand, wheels 4,9,10,21 were from objects around the house that had round base, i have attached a photo of the ellipse guide that i used for the rest. https://imgur.com/a/4lRyTJ9

https://imgur.com/a/xTJ8OJH

hello:), i included an extra one because i woked on it the most but it had few mistakes like using different size markers, sizes of the cylinders. so i did a different brick with two square holes. thank you for the last revision.

https://imgur.com/a/cRlEjWH

hello again, i have a small arrow and an X next to the edges that converge wrongly, there might be more that i missed, the large X is a an attempt that has few or alot of mistakes so i didnt count them from the hundred.

hello :)

https://imgur.com/a/IP3ecV1

https://imgur.com/a/DFHKSd4

Hello again :)

i have tackled the points you have mentioned to me in the review, i hope it shows in my submission.

branches:

i have extended each segment halfway to the next ellipse, drawn two full times elliptic shapes before lifting the pen and tried my best to tilt the degree of the ellipse to be more in tune with the branch position.

leaves exercise:

i have drawn them from step 1 till step 4.

plants construction:

the leaves are drawn from first to second to third step not skipping the second step marked number 1 in the page, number 2 on the page is where the flower petals are in line with where the ellipse is drawn and not passing it like i have submitted before, for the rose with no full construction of its petals i have drawn a simpler one from a top view, among other new things.

hii, thank you rob will keep in mind the points you have pointed out and will keep practicing them.