ZippyVirus

Hello. Thank you for your critique. While I will be taking your critiques into consideration, I will like to add that I did not attempt to do any of these exercises too quickly in any way. This lesson took me a month to do and I wholeheartedly made sure that I understood the instructions given and that I took my time. However, if you feel like I rushed this lesson, I understand; but I respectfully disagree that my attempt was the result of working too quickly. Thank you for understanding.

Thank you for your critique! I appreciate the kind words as well! I’m very excited to be able to move on.

Thank you so much for the critique! When doing exercises, how do I know which one to do for the day?

Ah! I apologize! Here's a working link! https://imgur.com/a/qQ8wmAb

But I understand now what you mean by goldilocks speed! Thank you!

Ah alright! Would you mind explaining to me what “Goldilocks speed” exactly is?

Here’s the updated images by the way! I decided to redo the frayed lines exercise for the fun of it!

https://imgur.com/a/qQ8wmAbI’m

Thank you so much for your critique! For the frayed lines, I believe I did use a rule to draw the first line. Also, how often should I be doing these warm ups, and how do I know which ones to do?

"Here is one way of drawing boxes that helped me understand: https://imgur.com/a/CP1JmaBA"

Unfortunately, this imgur link is broken so I am unable to see it. :(

Once I finish redoing these 2 exercises, should I show them to you?

Thank you again for your help! It is much appreciated! ^^

Lines:

• Superimposed lines: Nice job with your lines! There is very little wobbling with your smaller lines! Though the larger lines at the bottom have quite a large arch, they still look confident. Continue to try to make your lines straighter!

• Ghosted lines: Good job with ths one!

• Ghosted planes: Great job with your eclipses inside of the planes! Most of them reach all sides of the box! However, the lines of the boxes are quite wobbly.

Ellipses:

• Table of ellipses: Great job with these eclipses!

• Funnels: Good job with these! Some of the eclipses look a little wonky especially towards the middle of the funnel but thats ok, keep trying!

Boxes:

• Plotted perspective: Beautiful job with this! The lines look amazing!

• Rough perspective: Nice job with this! Though there are mistakes such as a couple of misshapen cubes, most cubes look great!

• Rotated boxes: Amazing job on this one! One minor thing I noticed is that the boxes at the very top and bottom looks more like a trapezoid than a square. However, you still did beautifully on this!