4:33 PM, Thursday February 3rd 2022
Thanks very much for your time reviewing the submission and providing the critique comments.
It was my misunderstanding in reading the line weight instructions, so I didn't line weight the two edges on the hatching side. Thanks for pointing it out.
I did notice a lot of the inner pair lines created diverging instead of converging. I mostly made VPs far off the paper so the inner pair lines run like parallel. That's a really hard struggling point for me. I will definitely try to practice more on the side and take your suggestion to mix in different longer/thinner/wider boxes!
Very much appreciated.