Unknown3137

Thank you for your review. So my mistake was not prioritizing enough the constructional method, and for future lessons i need to prioritize applying the teachings above all else, is that correct? Because when it comese to the close up, i ended up not doing the flow lines only because i was thinking about contrast, and how about there were so many lines that started to attract too much attention

P.S. out of curiosity, in my next homework assignments, should i include the photos i used as a reference for my drawings? i see other students doing it sometime, and i wonder if i should do the same

Hi, here's my 2nd remake: https://imgur.com/a/hVg5IYY

I'm writing some notes and doubts i had down here, i hope i'm not writing too much as i've been warned about writing long self-critiques on a previous homework submission.

Notes and doubts:

1. The points that you saw in my previous remake were used to "plan" my lines. I would place them and imagine the line going through them and if the line didn't fit my plans, i would just place more points. In this remake i avoided them as much as possible

2. In the leaves exercise there is one leaf (i indicated it) where i add edge detail by adding and subtracting and using the same line\mark; that is intentional since i felt that it was the only way to match the reference

3. There are 2 butterfly bush because: 1) i felt i didn't draw the first big enough 2) wasn't sure how to approach it (i also wonder if it would have been more appropriate to approach it like a texture, with a part "shaded" where i draw all the little flowers and the rest in the light, left blank with just a broken silhouette)

4. In the butterfly bush close up there are some flowers where i've drawn the flow lines for the petals. Ultimately i discarded this approach as i thought it added too many lines.

5. As for the american bittersweet i had problems with the leaves in particular. How am i supposed to treat the leaf's stem when it is in the foreground? i ended treating it like a branch but i'm unsure about my choice here

Hello, here are my exercises: https://imgur.com/a/pwsT3bw

Apologies for the delay.

I wasn't aware about the self-critique rule, i'll keep it in mind going forward. Here's my remake for the organic forms with contours exercise: https://imgur.com/a/2OmoCyz