UltimatumVox

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ultimatumvox's Sketchbook

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    11:57 PM, Tuesday March 2nd 2021

    Your ghosted planes improved. Some of them still weren't quick and smooth, but you'll get better with time. I think you're ready to move on.

    Next Steps:

    Do the 250 box challenge.

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    6:32 PM, Sunday February 28th 2021

    It looks like you're getting the hang of it. There are a few lines that seem a little squiggly, but I'm sure you did your best. I would suggest using a red gel pen to do the line tracing to the vanishing point. Marker is a little hard to see when the lines start converging/overlapping.

    Next Steps:

    Buy a colored pen or fine tip marker and move on to the 250 box challenge. They will give your line checking better readability.

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    6:26 PM, Sunday February 28th 2021

    When you did your ghosted planes, it's apparent that you weren't using swift lines, but it looks like you started getting the hand of using quick and confident lines when you were doing your rough perspective. Just remember to be confident in your strokes so that you don't end up with line jitter.

    Next Steps:

    Try redoing one page of ghosted planes, but with swift and confident lines. I suggest doing this just to see to it that you're getting in the habit of making good line work.

    When finished, reply to this critique with your revisions.
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