10:14 PM, Thursday March 12th 2020
Hi there, awesome feedback, it was really helpful and I'll definitely work on these points, thank you for your time.
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Meewi
Geometric Guerilla
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3:43 PM, Monday March 9th 2020
Good work, one thing that I could notice is that your lines tend to wobble/curve a little bit when dealing with the forms that are more compound (planes/boxes) in comparison to the singular (ghosting lines), try to focus on getting them straight and smooth, taking the time and treating each line of the compound as a single unit of effort. Other than that, I think you'll really benefit from going through the 250 boxes challenge (also keeping in mind that a box has 3 sets of lines, and each different set will converge to a vanishing point).
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5:05 PM, Friday February 21st 2020
I'm currently at this same situation, being brand new to digital art, I'm giving a try on the lesson 1 exercises digitally in parallel, since they're pretty much focused on the line confidence / quality. I felt a considerable improvement since then. But of course, considering the time I spent with this practice as part of the 50% study time.
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