I think you're showing a really strong sense of how to capture the illusion that you're drawing 3D forms. You're doing a great job of establishing the relationships between those forms on the page, using the sausage method, etc. Just a couple things:
Your linework is definitely kind of sketchy, you go back over lines a lot and may need to hold yourself back a little and apply the ghosting method a little more.
You only did it on the cockroach, but don't forget the notes from lesson 2's texture section about form shading.
Other than that, really great work.
Next Steps:
Move onto lesson 5
Hi there, awesome feedback, it was really helpful and I'll definitely work on these points, thank you for your time.
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