1:08 AM, Monday April 3rd 2023
Got it and thank you!
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Jyoon
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11:08 PM, Thursday March 30th 2023
Hi, I will be putting my 20 boxes here. I finally understand now.
6:46 PM, Monday March 20th 2023
ohhhhhhh omg i got it now. im so sorry, my mind sucks at thinking. thank you
7:42 PM, Sunday March 19th 2023
Is this perfect way to do it? If it isn't im sorry.
7:32 AM, Sunday March 19th 2023
I'm sorry, may I get clarification for this.
6:19 AM, Monday March 13th 2023
Hi again, I have completed 20 boxes with 3 vanishing points for first 10.
9:35 PM, Sunday February 19th 2023
Hi sorry for a long delayed, I finally completed my 20 boxes. I do have difficult time with foreshortening boxes.
11:15 PM, Saturday December 31st 2022
Thank you for your amazing critique Rob!
9:11 AM, Saturday August 13th 2022
Thank you for that. I wish could explained better
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2:48 AM, Saturday August 13th 2022
Hello PencilPeach, I will try my best to give feedback for your lesson 1 because this is my first time. I'm sorry if my English is crappy. Hope this helps.
Superimposed Lines
Lines look pretty good, but I see that some of your lines have fraying on both ends on the bottom of the pages.
Should place the pen carefully at the start of each line.
Ghosted lines and planes
For both of them, I’ll say you did a fine job. I see no wobbling lines and repeated lines for the ghosted planes. Only one minor problem for your ghosted lines is that few of them curve towards the endpoint in some spots.
Ellipses
Ellipse tables: You did really well keeping the ellipses kept within the bounds. Nice to see them touch each other, without overlapping.
Funnels: Good job trying to keep them aligned to the central minor axis line. The only mistake I see is the ellipses are not inside the funnel shape. Take your time keeping them inside the funnel shape.
Boxes
Plotted perspective: Looks good but some of the boxes have sketchy lines. Also be careful with your lineweight.
Rough perspective: I don’t really see any mistakes.
Organic perspective: Very good. Be careful with your line weight for a few of them, don’t make it too dark.
Rotated Boxes: Very good finishing this difficult lesson. The only mistake I see is that your few boxes aren’t rotating at the bottom right.
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