JanSiva

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    12:26 PM, Saturday October 10th 2020

    Noted thank you!!!!

    12:25 PM, Saturday October 10th 2020

    Noted thanks!!!!

    12:24 PM, Saturday October 10th 2020

    Noted thanks!!!!!!

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    8:47 AM, Thursday October 8th 2020

    Ur boxes are good. I can clearly see improvement regarding perspective on ur later boxes.

    I can see some of lines are wobble at its end its because u tried to stop ur pen before reaching the ending point to avoid overshooting instead try to lift ur pen when ur near the end point, at the end point u should lift ur pen completely from the paper ( like plane take off)

    I dont know why didnt u hatch ur boxes. Hatching improves ur line accuracy and confident. Its like practicing lines. And dont redraw ur lines it draws attention to the viewer and also dont correct it.

    And here is a tip for drawing inner corner FIGURE. This figure gives relationship between the lines. Its normal to have inaccurate inner corner. It can be improved

    Next Steps:

    Congrats!!!!

    u r ready for next lesson

    dont repeat ur lines

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    8:15 AM, Thursday October 8th 2020

    All ur boxes are perfectly drawn. And ur lines converge properly. I dont know why didnt u hatch them. Hatching helps the viewer to focus on front phases of the boxes. And i can see some of ur lines are bit wobble at its end its because u tried to stop ur pen before reaching the endpoint to avoid overshooting, instead lift ur pen when ur near the end point. In the end point u should completely lift ur pen from the paper (like plane take off)

    And a tip for perfect inner corner (Figure). This image clearly explains everything about relationship between lines. But it is normal to have inaccurate inner corner. It can be improved

    Next Steps:

    Avoid wobble lines

    U r ready for next lesson

    All the best

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    4:12 AM, Saturday September 26th 2020

    hii SREEVINESHA123,

    LINES

    SUPERIMPOSED LINES: They are great. The endings are sharp like an arrow.

    GHOSTED LINES: They are Confident and there is no wobbling. But Ur lines overshoot a lot. I guess u have drawn it so fast. so spend little more time in ghosting each and every line so that u might avoid overshooting. And i can see some of ur longer lines are arch a bit try to use ur shoulder. But sometimes it will arch even using the shoulder too however, and in this case it can be fixed by trying to arch consciously to the opposite direction.

    PLANES: They are great but as i said before they overshoots a lot

    ELLIPSE

    ELLIPSE IN TABLES: They are confident. They is no overlapping. It seems like u have ghosted it well. But draw the ellipse 2 or 3 times before lifting the pen. It gives u more practice and increases muscle memory. some of them wobbles a bit, absolutely nothing wrong with that. In my experience ellipse might take time when compare to lines. So dont worry, with a bit more practice u will end up with perfect ellipse.

    ELLIPSE IN PLANES: they are perfect, smooth and confident

    ELLIPSE IN FUNNEL: I like that the minor axis cuts all the ellipse into two equal halves. they are good. But u have missed major axis and its not a big deal

    BOXES

    PLOTTED PERSPECTIVE: it is perfect

    ROUGH PERSPECTIVE: ur width lines and height lines are perfectly parallel and perpendicular to the horizon. So it is perfect.

    ROTATED BOX: it is perfect too. the spacing between the back face (corner) of the boxes seems good.

    ORGANIC PERSPECTIVE: The scaling of the boxes are done fairly. U will achieve ur perfect boxes in 250 box challenge

    All the Best

    Cheers,

    JANSIVA

    Next Steps:

    Dont overshoot ur lines

    U r ready for 250 box challenge

    ALL THE BEST

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    5:03 AM, Thursday September 24th 2020

    Most welcome

    All the best

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    5:10 PM, Wednesday September 23rd 2020

    Hii SASHAINES127

    Here is ur delicious hard love criticism

    Lines

    Superimposed lines: they are good and perfect but ur curve lines try to draw them with ur shoulder in faster than the normal speed (but not superfast) it might give smooth and continuous curves

    Ghosted lines: I can see ur lines are bit wobble at the end. here is a super tip, while drawing ur line u try to stop ur pen when u come near the endingpoint it cause wobbling at the end of the line instead try this before reaching the end point slightly lift ur pen. In the ending point take off ur pen from the paper. Like the plane take off. Besides It avoids overshooting

    Ghosted planes: u r planes are good but some lines are exceeds the edges and some end before the edge apply the ghosted lines method here (the plane take off method)

    Ellipse

    Ellipse in planes: they are great

    Ellipse in tables: they are good some of them are bit wobbly and not so smooth. I know ellipse might take time when compare to lines. So take ur time. with a bit more practice it will become perfect and dont leave space between ur ellipses every ellipse should touch each other and the border of the table but should not overlap with other and table border. u can achieve it by ghosting it before drawing the ellipse

    Ellipse in funnels: as i said before dont leave space and dont overlap them. The purpose of this exercise is , the center minor axis should cut every ellipse in the funnel into two equal half. one of ur funnel break the rule ( right end funnel)

    Boxes

    Plotted Perspective: they are perfect

    Rough perspective: they are great. I like that ur vertical and horizontal lines in ur boxes are perfectly parallel and perpendicular to ur horizon

    Rotated Perspective: they are perfect. the spaces between the corner of the back face of the boxes are perfect.

    Organic perspective: they are good. the scaling of the boxes are great as the distance increases the boxes reduces in size.

    Cheers

    Jansiva

    Next Steps:

    Work on your ellipses try to draw them smooth and continuous

    All the best for your 250 box challenge

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    4:05 PM, Wednesday September 23rd 2020

    Hii Madhero

    Lines

    Superimposed lines: i can find some of ur lines are in arc shape u should draw it with ur shoulders it might be uncomfortable but with a little bit of practice u will find it easy and ur lines are wobble and not confident and not continuous try to draw it bit continuous and faster than normal speed (but not superfast)

    Ghosted lines: Some of ur lines doesnot have ending point. each lines should have both starting and ending points. and they also wobbles here is a tip try to lift ur pen before reaching the ending point if might avoid wobling and overshooting

    Ghosted Planes: in planes ur lines are overshooting apply ghosted lines method here

    Ellipse

    Ellipse in planes: they are wobble and not confident so ghost ur ellipse before drawing ellipse so u can achieve confident ellipse. Ellipse might take little bit time compare to lines so take ur time

    Ellipse in tables: 99% percentage of ur ellipse are good and continuous but the problem is ur ellipse should touch each other but should not overlap and some of them exceeds ur table borders, better way to avoid this is, do proper ghosting.

    Ellipse in funnel: dont leave space between the ellipses and try to draw each ellipse that should touch other ellipse and border of the funnel and u should draw both center vertical and horizontal lines and the purpose of this exercise is that ur center minor axis cuts all the ellipses in equal half

    Boxes

    Rough perspective: u have to extend ur lines from edges in the back face of the box to the horizon so that u might identify the angle of its depth (boxes) and make sure ur vertical and horizontal lines are parallel and perpendicular to ur horizon

    Rotated box: it is incomplete. The purpose is, as u continuously drawn the plotted and rough perspective ur mind will automatically tuned to one or two point perspective but unfortunately things in our real world comes different vanishing points so this exercise breaks the rule and it helps ur mind to imagine that there are so many vps in ur page. Dont worry about ur boxes u can achieve perfect boxes in 250 box challenge

    Plotted perspective: they are good

    Organic perspective: the purpose of this exercise is, understanding as the distance increases from the viewer the object become smaller gradually . Some of ur boxes does not come under this rule. even the boxes are larger than the boxes that are in front of it.

    All the best

    Next Steps:

    redo ur lesson 1

    a small tip dont concentrate on accuracy. purpose of every exercises are important

    All the best

    Cheers

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    2:55 PM, Wednesday September 23rd 2020

    Hii DOGGYDOG,

    Lines

    Superimposed lines: your lines are wobble and are not continuous. they should be smooth and confident. u should draw it fast and continuous.

    Ghosted lines: i can find some of your lines are start to wobble in middle. Its because u try to stop ur pen before reaching the ending point instead try this, slightly lift your pen before reaching the ending point u may achieve confidence in ur lines

    Ghosted planes: ur line are wobble just plan ur edges and apply ur ghosting method here

    Ellipse

    Ellipse in planes: they are not so smooth and continuous in my experience ellipse takes time when compare to lines so take ur time and u should ghost it before drawing it.

    Ellipse in funnel: same they are wobbly and i like that ur center minor axis cuts ur ellipses into two equal two half thats the purpose this exercise. And dont leave space between ur ellipses they should touch each other but should not overlap

    Ellipse in tables: as i said before they are wobble and not smooth and continuous

    Boxes

    Plotted Perspective: they are good

    Rough perspective: some of ur vertical lines are not so perpendicular to the horizon but ur parallel lines are perfect they are parallel to ur horizon

    Rotated box: the spacing between the back face of the boxes are good i can see u understand the concept and purpore of the exercise dont worry u can a achieve perfect boxes in 250 box challenge

    Organic boxes: I like ur oraganic boxes they are great but dont stike out ur mistakes in future exercise and drawings because u r deceiving ur audience by drawing 3d form in 2d sheet if u strike it, it will automatically drag attention toward ur mistakes

    All the Best

    Cheers,

    Jansiva

    Next Steps:

    You should work on ur lines start from superimposed lines

    I know ellipse might take little bit time. So take ur time

    Redo ur superimposed lines, Ghosted lines, Ghosted planes, Table of ellipse, ellipse in ghosted planes, Rough perspective

    Make sure u practice until u get smoother and continuous lines, and ellipses

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