4:48 PM, Tuesday January 19th 2021
Here are my redos! It would be very much appreciated if you could look over it.
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9:43 AM, Wednesday January 20th 2021
Funnels: I'm glad to see that you were more careful with making sure the line bisects the ellipses this time around. However, I do feel that you might have been rushing through it a bit, as your ellipses themselves are a bit wobblier and they don't fit as snugly as they did in your first attempt. I also see some slanting, so I do want to point out that you should keep your ellipses angled consistently. I think you understand all the requirements for the exercise, so I won't ask you to repeat it, but this is all stuff you can keep in mind in case you do this exercise as a warm-up in the future!
Rough Perspective: I don't have any critiques for your rough perspective. You fixed the things I pointed out. It looks great!
Rotated Boxes: Good work with the rotated boxes. I can see that the spacing between your boxes sometimes drifts a little but most importantly I think you understand how the angles of the boxes should be converging as they rotate.
Organic Perspective: No further critiques for this exercise either! Plus, I think you'll get plenty of future practice with the upcoming 250 Box Challenge.
Overall, I think you've definitely shown improvement in these revisions. Of course, it would always be good to revisit these lessons now and then for practice, but I think it's fine for you to move on to the next stage, which would be the 250 Box Challenge. I hope my critiques have been helpful. Best of luck!
Next Steps:
250 Box Challenge
1:07 PM, Wednesday January 20th 2021
Thank you so much for all of your help! Can't wait to see your revisions soon.
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