9:22 AM, Monday April 17th 2023
Welcome to Drawabox! I'll seperate the critique here.
Lines
Super imposed lines have some common errors for the first page, but from what I see, your second page seems to be even better than before, just the longer lines seem to fray towards the end. Really like the arching lines you did, they are very well drawn. Other than the common mistakes, these are very great! Same goes for the ghosted lines and planes, I can see a few mistakes here and there but I can see that you are gaining confidence as you draw more and more, so congrats!
Ellipses
Very great work here, most of these ellipses are very well drawn. You are clearly comfortable with curved lines. There are few mistakes here and there, but they are very minor. There are a few ellipses that are off in Planes and Funnels, but other than that, I'd say you did a great job here.
Boxes
Very well done here as well. I really like your Rotated Boxes exercise. They are consistent. I'd say the only problem with it is that you didn't really push on the rotated aspect, but it's visible you have an idea of space, so great job! And the cross hathichng is very well done as well. On the Rough Perspective, there are a few mistakes here and there, your line confidence seems to not be consistent here, but you made quick work of it with the Organinc perspective.
Overall
Great work here! Just remember to plan your lines and don't forget about the 50/50 rule. You should always remember to have fun while drawing. Ask anything if you need or have questions about something. I think you can continue to the 250 box challenge, remember to read carefully what you have to do and have fun!
Next Steps:
You can continue with the 250 box challenge.