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7:13 PM, Monday May 24th 2021

Hi! These are looking quite a bit better. The ellipses are still a little lacking in confidence, but much improved, and liable to improve further, should you keep pushing them in that direction. The rotated boxes exercise looks solid, save for the occasional (totally expected) issue with its rotation. Really, this exercise passes so long as you’ve seen it through to the end, which you have, this time. Solid work on this lesson, and continue improving yourself slowly, and steadily.

Next Steps:

Head to the box challenge, to take the next step in that journey.

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4:25 PM, Monday June 7th 2021

Thanks a lot, Benj! Moving to the box challenge now.

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Like the Staedtlers, these also come in a set of multiple weights - the ones we use are F. One useful thing in these sets however (if you can't find the pens individually) is that some of the sets come with a brush pen (the B size). These can be helpful in filling out big black areas.

Still, I'd recommend buying these in person if you can, at a proper art supply store. They'll generally let you buy them individually, and also test them out beforehand to weed out any duds.

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