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7:37 PM, Sunday July 12th 2020

Hello sir! Here's my redo's for Rough and Organic Perspective. The lines are still wobbly, I have this habit of going over lines again, so I've been trying to do that a lot less. I'm working from my shoulder, focusing even more on it now instead of getting complacent and likely reverting back to using my wrist. Any additional insights and feedback you can provide me are greatly appreciated, thank you in advance!

https://imgur.com/a/FBTq7zv

11:07 PM, Sunday July 12th 2020

Your lines are a bit improved here but yeah really try not going over multiple lines at this point even if you feel like your initial line is wrong. You are better off going with one line that is slightly off than adding another line that just confuses and clutters the image even more. Your rough perspective boxes could still use plenty of practice. Some good things to think about when drawing boxes in one point perspective like that is that all horizontal lines should be parallel to the horizon line. You are getting a lot of slanting here and that is something you really should be thinking about when plotting your points. The same thing with your vertical lines. They should be straight up and down while drawing one point perspective boxes like this.

Keep up with your line practice in your warmups. I'm going to mark this as complete. Good luck with the box challenge.

This critique marks this lesson as complete.
11:19 PM, Sunday July 12th 2020

Thank you for your critique and guidance! I'll continue on being wary of my plotted points as I enter into the 250 Box Challenge. Enjoy the remainder of your week!

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