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4:44 PM, Thursday January 12th 2023

Hi,

Took sometime but I ded the revisions.

https://imgur.com/a/thsZFKQ

8:52 PM, Friday January 13th 2023

Your organic forms and organic intersections are looking better but you're still not drawing your intersections in the form intersections exercise.

Read over the form intersections exercise again and take a look at this diagram which may help make the task a bit clearer.

I'll be asking you to complete one more page of the form intersections exercise please. Remember to take your time, utilize the ghosting method and draw confidently as well, some of your forms got a bit wobbly here.

Next Steps:

1 more page of form intersections.

When finished, reply to this critique with your revisions.
4:31 PM, Saturday January 21st 2023

Hi, I completed the page:

https://imgur.com/a/9X5qNtz

Thank you for the diagram. It helped to clear things up a bit. Although I am still not super confident with intersections.

8:57 PM, Saturday January 21st 2023

Not being super confident is alright, it is a tricky concept but we want to make sure you are introduced to and at least attempt them.

We'll be working with them going forward and it will hopefully help make them a bit more understandable.

I'll be marking your submission complete and move you on to lesson 3, best of luck.

Next Steps:

Move on to lesson 3.

This critique marks this lesson as complete.
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