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4:58 PM, Wednesday January 18th 2023

Hi!

It's great you didn't use the pencil, a little bit of marks after ghosting is ok!

I think it would be great to redo rotated boxes, trying to keep the distances consistent and narrow.

Your English is perfectly understandable for me, it's also not my native :)

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6:19 PM, Wednesday January 18th 2023

Hello!

I redid the rotated boxes check them out.

https://ibb.co/dQPcNJc

9:37 AM, Thursday January 19th 2023
edited at 2:00 PM, Jan 19th 2023

This is a much better try! The corner boxes are a little bit closer to the viewer than they should be, but not much. Great job!

You can go to 250 box challenge now, good luck!

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edited at 2:00 PM, Jan 19th 2023
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