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7:04 PM, Wednesday August 24th 2022

I'm glad to hear you're doing better.

These boxes look solid, you extended your lines in the correct direction and experimented quite a bit with different rates of foreshortening, great work. It's nice to see that you tried applying line weight as well.

I'll be marking your submission complete and move you on to the next lesson.

Keep pracitcing boxes and previous exercises as warm ups and best of luck in lesson 2.

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12:26 AM, Thursday August 25th 2022

Thank you so much for all your feedback. I am very excited to start lesson 2!

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