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3:38 AM, Wednesday September 14th 2022

Congratulations on finishing the challenge!

You have shown remarkable improvement in dot placement, VPs alignment and VPs placement. That alone means you can move on to lesson 2, but before you do that, I would like you to do 20 more boxes with these instructions in mind:

  • Your VP alignment, although has improved, is still inaccurate. When you try to align the (inner) corner with existing VPs or otherwise, you can ghost lines (without putting the pen down of course!) to figure out where to put the corners of the box/VP.

  • You can try drawing bigger boxes, as it does put you out of your comfort zone and force you to figure out how to draw boxes accurately. Placing dots with big boxes are actually harder than with small ones.

20 boxes ain't much, but it does help you get the hang of it!

6:33 PM, Thursday September 15th 2022

Hey Monte_Cristo666!

Thank you so much for taking the time to critique my boxes, I really appreciate your effort. I will definitely do another 20 boxes ASAP. I really found the inner corners to be the most challenging, I'll try ghosting lines like you suggested and I'll definitely make some bigger boxes. Thanks again!

3:41 PM, Monday October 3rd 2022

Hey MONTE_CRISTO_666

Hope you're well. Apologies for taking so long to get back to you, life has been a little mad lately.

Revision link: https://imgur.com/a/brvohGN

Here is my revision for the 250 Box challenge, I tried what you suggested, the back corner is still giving me trouble. I'm going to try do some perspective exercises with a ruler and alternate between freehand exercises to see If I can get a better grip on it. Tygerson also gave me some fantastic advice to try as well.

Thanks again for the feedback, I really appreciate it.

11:11 AM, Saturday October 8th 2022

Yeah you nailed them right. Congratulations! There aren't anything else to say really.

Next Steps:

You can move on to lesson 2.

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11:28 AM, Monday October 10th 2022

Thanks again fpr your time and feedback! I really appreciate it.

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