12:46 PM, Tuesday February 25th 2020
Hi there, Filurfelix!
I ask you to do 50 more boxes and try to improve in areas I mention below.
I needed to see 3 things in your work
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Drawing through your forms
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Checking our convergences
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Line weight
You did draw through all of your forms. That's good!
But other 2 are the problem here.
My main concern with your work is convergence. There are quite a few boxes where you didn't extend your checking lines in right direction. Examples are 4, 5, 10, 11, 12, 14, 15, 16, 17, 66, 67. Though I didn't try to find all of incorrect ones. Your last (200-250 for sure) boxes do not have such a problem.
Other problem is line weight. Things like too much line weight, weight in internal lines, excessive corrections/drawing over incorrect line. Examples: 16, 19, 20, 25, 235, 239, 247, 250.
And minor suggestion don't lean so much on dramatic foreshortening . In actual drawings you'll need shallow more often (by it's definition).
Please check orginal challenge notes that I pinned above.
Next Steps:
50 boxes with correct line extension and lineweight use