This is much better. You can feel the weight of the sausages. You did however, completely ignore cast shadows which is another important part of the sausages. Be sure to change the degree of the ellipses based on whether or not they are moving away from the viewer. I would like you to try 1 more time.
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1 page of organic intersections
hows this one, ignore the top left cylinder it has nothing to do with the intersection lol https://imgur.com/a/buNkamp
This is good, the cast shadows are a bit small but they still help to sell the illusion that these are 3d objects. Try drawing bigger next time.
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Lesson 3
thanks again for the critique! i was busy and decided to do it on a random piece of paper hence the reason its a bit small lol.
This recommendation is really just for those of you who've reached lesson 6 and onwards.
I haven't found the actual brand you buy to matter much, so you may want to shop around. This one is a "master" template, which will give you a broad range of ellipse degrees and sizes (this one ranges between 0.25 inches and 1.5 inches), and is a good place to start. You may end up finding that this range limits the kinds of ellipses you draw, forcing you to work within those bounds, but it may still be worth it as full sets of ellipse guides can run you quite a bit more, simply due to the sizes and degrees that need to be covered.
No matter which brand of ellipse guide you decide to pick up, make sure they have little markings for the minor axes.
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