3:06 AM, Wednesday November 23rd 2022
thank you or the critique!! i redid the organic intersection https://imgur.com/a/1tMOYuf
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5:44 AM, Thursday November 24th 2022
This is much better. You can feel the weight of the sausages. You did however, completely ignore cast shadows which is another important part of the sausages. Be sure to change the degree of the ellipses based on whether or not they are moving away from the viewer. I would like you to try 1 more time.
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5:40 AM, Friday November 25th 2022
hows this one, ignore the top left cylinder it has nothing to do with the intersection lol https://imgur.com/a/buNkamp
6:23 AM, Friday November 25th 2022
This is good, the cast shadows are a bit small but they still help to sell the illusion that these are 3d objects. Try drawing bigger next time.
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Lesson 3
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