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5:53 PM, Tuesday September 22nd 2020

Arrows are great

You got a lot of detail on your branches, and that may be hiding information about the construction, but it looks nice.

Same for leaves.

Your plant drawings are really great. Only thing I can point out is for you to try to work additively, mainly with leaf shapes. But you did a great job.

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Definitely a great submission! Good work! You can move on to Lesson 4

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1:24 AM, Wednesday September 23rd 2020

Thanks for the feedback. Yep I agree with you. I started to understand the additive/ subtractive differences and applications after this lesson. The most difficult thing I find is not caring about the image's final aesthetics and focusing on the task at hand.

Once again, thanks for the input! :)

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