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4:12 AM, Tuesday May 26th 2020

You didn't add line weight which is important to help you boxes look solid. https://drawabox.com/lesson/250boxes

Other than that it looks like you understood the point of the exercise. Goodjob! Keep improving your convergences.

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It's important you go back and add lineweight as shown here https://drawabox.com/lesson/250boxes

" One technique that is extremely useful both in reinforcing the illusion of solidity in our forms and in helping to organize our linework and clarify how different forms overlap is the use of line weight. " After you do that I say move on to lesson 2

When finished, reply to this critique with your revisions.
10:48 AM, Thursday May 28th 2020

Done!

https://imgur.com/a/zqmFD3k

I tried to keep the lines subtly thicker as advised in the instructions but now it seems to me it's not even noticable in some cases... Anyway, at least I got better at keeping the lines confident, I think.

Thanks for the feedback, by the way!

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