9:21 PM, Sunday February 23rd 2020
While you have already received critique from a community member, I do want to point out that if you want official critique from Uncomfortable or one of the TAs, you'll need to resubmit this for official critique using your credits. If you don't care about official crits and just want to support what Uncomfy is doing here at DaB, then let me know and I'll go ahead and agree with Rikchan's crit so that you can get your lesson 3 badge ^u^