No problem. I hope that it is not too overwhelming. I based my feedback on the order of the images in your imgur link. If you have any questions feel free to ask. You may not want to take in the entire critique at once.
Hi!
I've went through your critique, here is the insect construction focused on the connection method, it was a new concept for me so I struggled a little bit with it.
Regarding the critique in itself, thanks a lot again, I read it a few times taking my time and was pretty clear, that's why I took some time to respond.
Nice! Very good. It is all coming together now! Get it? Because the sausages are connected aka coming together and your construction is done. Pun intended... You are ready for lesson 5! I was in the same boat when I started the sausage connection method. I accidentally skipped it entirely. Oof.
P.S. The sausage connection method is an integral part in lesson 5 homework.
Next Steps:
Next Steps:
Lesson 5: Animals
I actually laughed at the punt, I don't know if that's good or bad
Again, thanks a lot, you've really put a lot of effort on reviewing my work, i'm gonna get into lesson 5 now!
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