Lesson 3: Applying Construction to Plants

11:28 AM, Thursday October 29th 2020

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I have included the demo drawings as well.

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12:22 AM, Friday October 30th 2020

Starting with your arrows, you're doing a good job of drawing these such that they flow smoothly and confidently through space. One minor point I want to mention though is that when you use hatching lines as you've done here, it's best to draw them between two specific locations - for example, between two concrete edges, rather than having them stop at an arbitrary distance. This isn't necessarily the case with hatching done with, say, ballpoint or graphite, but with fineliner due to how the tool behaves, it's best to adhere to this as a general rule.

Continuing onto your leaves, you've done a good job of carrying over the confidence and fluidity of your arrows. As such, you're establishing not only how those leaves sit in space, but also how they move through the space they occupy. I'm also pleased to see the manner in which you've built up more complex edges, building directly on top of the previous phase of construction. You may also want to explore more complex leaf structures on your own, however, to familiarize yourself with how this technique can be used to tackle leaves that are not limited to this level of simplicity.

For your branches, I have just one minor point - make sure that you extend your edge segments fully halfway to the next ellipse, ensuring that you have a more considerable overlap between that segment and the next one. As shown here, this overlap is key to getting them to transition more smoothly and seamlessly from one to the next.

Moving onto your plant constructions, you have largely done a good job, though I do have some recommendations as you move forwards:

  • Be careful with the size of your drawings. There are cases where you're drawing larger, and cases where you're drawing smaller. Drawing smaller can be tricky due to how our brains benefit from being given more room to think through spatial problems, and it is also easier to engage our whole arm while drawing. Drawing smaller can result in clumsier linework, and more limited capacity to understand the forms we're drawing as they exist in 3D space. It's not something I noticed as a huge problem here, but definitely something to keep in mind as you move forwards.

  • As shown here, when you have a 3D form that has volume of its own (so not a flat petal/leaf), you cannot cut back into its silhouette without causing it to appear flat. Petals and leaves are exempt from this simply because they're already flat. So in a situation like the one depicted, you would create a solid form, and then cover it with little petals, wrapping them around this solid form, not attempting to undermine the solidity of the form. Also, note the way my marks are little V's, because I'm not drawing the outline of those individual petal forms - I'm drawing the shadows they cast on their surroundings, as discussed back in lesson 2's texture section.

  • As shown here, there can sometimes be a tendency to skip over intermediary steps in construction. Always remember that you want to ensure that the complexity you add in a given phase of construction must be supported by the structure that is already present. If there isn't enough to support it, then tone it down and try to build up the kind of structure you will need, breaking things into more individual steps.

  • Also in regards to that last one, note that you do not redraw your edges in every subsequent phase of construction - you only draw the parts that change.

  • The bottom left of this page shows that when it comes to texture, you may be confusing it with the idea of "decoration". The drawings we do within this course have a very specific focus. They're exercises in spatial reasoning and visual communication, and as such, every part of the process is focused heavily on what we're communicating. With construction, we communicate to the viewer what they need to know to understand how they might manipulate a given object in space. With texture, we communicate to the viewer what they need to know to understand what it'd feel like to run their fingers over the object's various surfaces. It is not just random marks we're putting down arbitrarily - we are implying the presence of actual 3D information, of little textural forms - again, as discussed in lesson 2.

So! With those points laid out, I'll go ahead and mark this lesson as complete. Be sure to continue working on these things as you move onto the next lesson.

Next Steps:

Feel free to move onto lesson 4.

This critique marks this lesson as complete.
11:45 AM, Friday October 30th 2020

This is just wonderful. I'm thrilled to have feedback from you personally - especially the marked up images - it clears things up for sure. I should really be waiting to make improvements after getting feedback, but unfortunately I'm already onto lesson 5 (I don't know what else to do with myself during this pandemic—and really, your drawing course has been really beneficial for a way to unwind) I will keep your advice in mind going forward.

Thanks for all your hard work.

Tyler

2:57 PM, Friday October 30th 2020

Unfortunately it's not just about "should really be waiting" - it's a requirement of the course, as explained here, that you are not allowed to submit work done prior to getting feedback on the given lesson's prerequisites. As such you will be required to do Lesson 4 over, rather than just submitting what you've already completed in two week's time.

This ensures that the work you submit is an accurate representation of what you understand right now, rather than what you understood a month ago. If the feedback given here is not reflected in the work you submit next, then it becomes less useful. Ensuring that the work submitted is up to date helps us ensure that our time is spent as productively as possible. That is part of the agreement that comes with the fact that we charge relatively little for giving critiques.

As to not knowing what else to do with yourself during the pandemic - that, along with rushing forwards with the lessons often suggests that a student may not be adhering to the 50% rule introduced in Lesson 0. I hope that is not the case for you, and if it is, you should make sure that you start adhering to that rule now.

9:06 PM, Friday October 30th 2020

Certainly, that's fair. I can stand to look at some more insects / arachnids )(???) and circle round back to that. To be honest, the homework for lesson 5 has been pretty hard, so I think I need to circle back anyway and do more practice first.

Until then!

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