First off, thank you for the quick and thorough critique. You were absolutely right about me rushing through the ghosting method and not truly understanding the vanishing points. My biggest mistake was not proceeding slowly enough.
I'm still having great trouble understanding the concepts of boxes in 3D space, as evidenced by the organic perspective revision, but I'm not going to give up.
Please let me know if this is adequate,
Now your lines looks more confident and clean. However, I can see you added too much weight to your boxes in organic perspective. If you want to add line weight to these boxes, you need to be subtle. You'll need to know this for the 250 boxes challenge.
Next Steps:
Move to the 250 boxes challenge, which will help you understand better how a box moves and works in perspective
Here we're getting into the subjective - Gerald Brom is one of my favourite artists (and a pretty fantastic novelist!). That said, if I recommended art books just for the beautiful images contained therein, my list of recommendations would be miles long.
The reason this book is close to my heart is because of its introduction, where Brom goes explains in detail just how he went from being an army brat to one of the most highly respected dark fantasy artists in the world today. I believe that one's work is flavoured by their life's experiences, and discovering the roots from which other artists hail can help give one perspective on their own beginnings, and perhaps their eventual destination as well.
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