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8:11 PM, Monday March 21st 2022

Wow, thank you very much for the review, it is very complete.

Do I need to show you the 30 boxes I make later?

9:44 PM, Monday March 21st 2022

Yes, put them on a new imgur album and reply to me with the link.

12:57 PM, Wednesday April 13th 2022

Hi, I hope it's not a bother, but imgur was not working and I uploaded my work on drive.

Here is the folder: https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1iu0slI8xNH1jSjUPSiIiDhO6-vOQtsL2?usp=sharing

I really started to understand your instructions more in the last 10 boxes, I still gave my best effort!

2:20 PM, Wednesday April 13th 2022

Okay, so far these are looking good, the main things you will need to keep practicing are the convergences, we still have some lines converging in pairs and some diverging. Also try to give your boxes more room, I did notice a few boxes that were too small, which makes it harder to engage our whole arm.

I am sure this issues will diminish with more practice and mileage so I'll go ahead and mark this lesson as complete.

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