11:06 AM, Tuesday March 23rd 2021
LINES
You done a good job with the line exercises, I have nothing in particular to critique here.
ELLIPSES
- Ellipses lacks confidence and smoothness
-From the first two ellipses exercises you seem to have stuggled with forming confident and smooth ellipses, though on the third exercise you're ellipses improved. I still highly recommend doing them as warmups to keep that consistency and improve more
- Ellipses going out of bounds
-You seem to be rushing you're ellipses, you seem to have ghosted them though, I think you maybe going too fast in executing them resulting to some of you're wild looking ellipses. I recommend you try to strike a balance with the speed of you're execution, if that's ever the case.
BOXES
- Unfinished box in the rough perspective exercise
-You seem to have gave up with one box there, I furiously recommend you always finish what you started, despite knowing that it will fail or sucks, It's simply a good habit to have.
- Some width lines are not parallel to the horizon and some height lines are not perpendicular to the horizon in the rough perspective exercise
-I noticed some of you're lines going to different directions, making the boxes breakdown into a slanted figure, I recommend you ghost you're lines more.
- Boxes inconsistent lineweight
-At thge organic perspective exercise you struggled with adding line weight, I recommend you do the superimposed exercise as a warmup.
Overall good job! Congrats in completing lesson 1!
Next Steps:
Do the 250 boxes challenge, do some warm-ups before each drawabox session, and critique other submissions (their a great way to contribute to the drawabox community and review some drawabox concepts)
