Hey there and congrats on making it through Lesson One! Good job :D

Very first thing I noticed is that it seems like you're using a purple pen, right? It's okay for the first Lesson but onward I think it would be better if you'd stick to black fineliners!

Lines are looking good. They're a bit wobbly and arching here and there but this is still fine and normal. You'll have plenty of time to practice those too, so right now, good job!

Ellipses are good as well! You're drawing through them two times and for the Tables of Ellipses you're making sure they're neatly and tightly next to each other. No issues spotted here!

Boxes are great as well. You're keeping your lines straight and confident. In the Organic Perspective one's I noticed you're drawing over them from time to time. I know you're probably feeling insecure about the perspective, but I think it's honestly fine. You'll get to train and practice that in the upcoming 250 Box Challenge! So no worries if they still feel off here. You'll have 250 Boxes to practice on haha.

A tip for next time you're uploading pictures: In your Rough Perspective your sheets of paper are laying on the side, which makes it hard for the viewer to properly judge your work. Make sure your work is facing the right direction!

All in all good job and well done! You can go on to the 250 Box Challenge. Good luck!!

• Lerin

  (PS: If you didn't understand anything, don't hesitate to ask me!)