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9:30 PM, Wednesday December 21st 2022

Thank you so much for the feedback.I'll makes sure to work on everthing you said.

Ghosted planes exercise:

https://imgur.com/a/Oht4ltq

11:12 PM, Wednesday December 21st 2022

Hey Burry,

I'm seeing improvement between this page and the last. I wanted to point out to you a really good line that you ghosted (the blue arrow).

https://imgur.com/a/33ifkcJ

This is exactly what you should be aiming for every time you draw a line.

  • Smooth and no hesitation

  • accurate on one side, but misses the point on the other side (accuracy improves with time)

On the other hand there are some cases where you miss you points on both sides (arrows in red)

Remember you can control you starting point. Its simply where you place you pen. Get in the habit of taking note where you place your pen before you execute.

I'm going to mark you as complete, but I would still like you to practice your lines during you warmups.

Good luck in the 250 box challenge,

JustCuteGirlzArt

Next Steps:

During warmups focus on ghosting and plane ghosting exercises .

Continue on to the 250 box challenge

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11:59 PM, Wednesday December 21st 2022

i appreciate the help. thank you again

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A lot of my students use these. The last time I used them was when I was in high school, and at the time I felt that they dried out pretty quickly, though I may have simply been mishandling them. As with all pens, make sure you're capping them when they're not in use, and try not to apply too much pressure. You really only need to be touching the page, not mashing your pen into it.

In terms of line weight, the sizes are pretty weird. 08 corresponds to 0.5mm, which is what I recommend for the drawabox lessons, whereas 05 corresponds to 0.45mm, which is pretty close and can also be used.

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