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8:19 PM, Friday July 9th 2021

Hi!! Here's my critique :>

LINES

  1. Superimposed lines: Fairly accurate, fraying only a little on the end, overall very good. Great job with the curvy lines,

  2. Ghosted lines: Straight and very accurate, good job

  3. Ghosted planes: Extremely accurate, I see that pretty much all the lines meet in the same spot, great job

ELLIPSES

  1. Tables of ellipses: Drawn through both times, smooth lines, close enough to fit inside the frame. A lot of the ellipses' both attempts are really accurate, very nice job

  2. Ellipses in planes: Smooth lines, fitting inside the borders well, good job again :D

  3. Funnels: Symmetric, good job

BOXES

  1. Plotted perspective: According to the instructions, though I'm not 100% sure if it's necessary to draw the lines all the way to the vanishing point, but as far as I can tell the lines are all correct

  2. Rough perspective: I see you went through some lines multiple times, but as far as I know we're supposed to draw it once no matter how it came out, so watch out for that. Overall nice job

  3. Rotated boxes: You drew all the lines in the back, overall looks great to me

  4. Organic perspective: Straight lines, great job

Overall, wonderful job :D

Next Steps:

I'd say you can freely move onto the 250 boxes challenge :]

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4:46 AM, Saturday July 10th 2021

Thank you very much for the critique! I really appreciate it!

12:11 PM, Sunday July 11th 2021

My pleasure :D

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