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7:00 PM, Friday September 25th 2020
edited at 7:01 PM, Sep 25th 2020

Aight, let's see shall we?

Looking at the remaining textures i see you had a lot of trouble doing them and i'm not blaming you. I think when you feel you're ready for it you can try to do the texture challenge if you want more practice with this.

Form intersection boxes look nice but the intersections themselves are difficult to see and i think some line weight (going over it again to make the line thicker) does the trick.

Your sausages look a lot better and give more weight to them. Looks a bit small but they have a feeling of weight. Only real issue is the shadows. I went over it with red lines where they go. it isn't perfect but it does the job

Adding these to your warm-up routine along the other exercises from lesson 2 (other than dissection and texture) will make you slowly but surely improve.

Gonna mark this as complete, you understand the basics as far as i've seen and it's time for you to see the other part of Draw a Box, constructional drawing!

Next Steps:

Move on to lesson 3 and when ready pick up texture challenge. Do the texture challenge along side the lessons though. Don't fully focus on it like the other challenges.

Good luck!

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edited at 7:01 PM, Sep 25th 2020
7:51 PM, Friday September 25th 2020

Thank you for your time! I am glad you wanted to help and that i seem to have imrpoved a little bit just from your feedback. I will keep doing these things in warmup along with everyhting else and hope to see improvment.

Thank you!

9:23 PM, Saturday September 26th 2020

Anytime

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