2:57 PM, Wednesday April 26th 2023
Hi LUCKLESSTYCHE,
I have taken a look at your lesson 1 results and will share my observations.
Lines Section
I have seen you draw confident lines, which is more important than accuracy. Also if accuracy is not first priority there are many lines on page 2 which are not hitting one of both dots. The line should never miss the starting dot, because that's the point where you start tipping the paper for drawing the line. You can alway miss the target point with over or undershooting, but there is no obvious reason to miss the starting point. On page 1 you did it :-).
Ellipses
All ellipses are drawn through 2 to 3 times, which is perfect. Most ellipses are drawn confident, only some have wobbly lines that's good. The weakest point I can observe is accuracy. The ellipses should be kept within the bounds, each ellipse touching each other, without overlapping. This criteria is only matching few of the ellipses. I recommend to invest more time in ghosting the ellipses before putting the pen to the paper. Ghosting method works for ellipses as well as for lines. On funnels lesson the most ellipses are cut in 2 symmetrical halves, which is good. Also in the funnels section accuracy of touching and bounds is the weakest point.
Boxes
All the boxes are drawn through boxes, except on the organic perspective, which is perfect. It seems like you forgot to "Using a ruler, take all of your depth lines and extend them to where they intersect with the horizon." on second rough perspective page. That's something you still have to do, to verify your results yourself. Rotated Boxes exercise looks good to me! I know it's a tough one.
Best,
Neuromancer
Next Steps:
TODO
On rough perspective, use the line correction method, for the second page as well and you are done.