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1:47 PM, Thursday September 10th 2020

Hello! Thanks for giving your time to critique my works. Your advice about trying to let off the pen early really helped me out on my ghosted planes.

Here is my revisions to ghosted planes, ellipse tables, ellipses on planes, funnels, rough perspective, and organic perspective.

https://imgur.com/a/w9f9vnO

7:35 PM, Saturday September 12th 2020

Sorry about the wait. Your planes are better but you still don't have enough per page, they should all be touching each other like a jigsaw puzzle. Those ellipse tables look greatly improved, good job. Your ellipses on planes fit much better but could still use some work. I like what you did with your funnels, well done. Your rough perspective is now correct, same as your organic perspective. If you need help with those, remember to visualize the VP and make all lines converge.

Next Steps:

Move on to the 250 box challenge while still practicing lesson 1 exercises for your warm up.

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