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10:05 AM, Sunday April 17th 2022
edited at 10:12 AM, Apr 17th 2022

Congrats on completing Lesson 1.

It looks like you didn't always use the ruler in the superimposed lines exercise. Lines are generally smooth, and properly lined up at the start, but you’ll sometimes stress about their trajectory – don’t. The ghosted lines/planes are mostly confident. In the ghosted planes you could use the space better.

In the table of ellipses exercise and the ellipses in planes are some ellipses deformed and overlapped. You "draw through" and confident. You can rotate the page to better align the ellipses. The funnels look alright.

The plotted perspective exercise looks alright.

In the rough perspective exercise, only two pages required. The exercise looks alright. The lines are sometimes wobbly.

Nice job on the rotated boxes exercise.

In organic perspective exercise are the most boxes well done.

Maybe next time you could do a better job with the photost. It's best if page is aligned horizontal and vertically and photographed directly from above.

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edited at 10:12 AM, Apr 17th 2022
12:44 AM, Monday April 18th 2022

Hi!

Thank you for your comment.

I don't understand what you mean by this sentences. Plz explain to me more.

Maybe next time you could do a better job with the photost. It's best if page is aligned horizontal and vertically and photographed directly from above.

Have a nice day!

11:52 AM, Monday April 18th 2022

The quality of the pictures was not so good. When you take the picture, try to take it directly from above.

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