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7:05 PM, Saturday April 16th 2022

Hello Oopsilon! I have identified a couple of things in your homework that you should look out for in the future, so let's go through them.

Firstly, your lines seem to be wobbly in the beginning, but this is completely alright since you made progress over time. Mistakes in the Superimposed lines exercise keep occurring until you reach Rough perspective. If you would like me to specify which mistakes you've made, feel free to ask.

Only exercise I would like to touch on in this section is Ghosted planes, in which you could have used the space better.

Now, let's move onto your ellipses :

In the first exercise, Tables of ellipses, some spacing issues tend to happen ( overlapping ).

Moving on, considering your Ellipses in planes, most of your ellipses tend to deform. We should try our best to hit all of the edges, but we can't change their shape. What we can play around with is their position and size.

To finish off, we're going to talk about your boxes :

First exercise in this section is Plotted perspective. What I can say about it is that you used the space really well, but one thing that confuses me are certain boxes that overlap. I think that this is not a problem, but you might want to keep a distance between them when this exercise becomes a part of your warm up session.

Next up we have Rough perspective and one thing I would like to mention here is that width lines should be parallel and height lines perpendicular to the horizon.

Lastly, in Rotated boxes exercise I just have to point out that you're missing a couple of boxes on the edges.

In conclusion, you grasped the content well and improved the essential things you need to move on. I would just advise you to add homework from ellipses section more often into your warm ups. I'm glad you submitted your work and good luck in the 250 boxes challenge!

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1:31 AM, Sunday April 17th 2022

Hi!

Thank you so much for your energy and time.

Please tell me about this "quote from your reply".

First exercise in this section is Plotted perspective. What I can say about it is that you used the space really well, but one thing that confuses me are certain boxes that overlap.

Which boxes that confuses you? Please inform me how to correct them. I don't know the principle when things overlap.

Lastly, in Rotated boxes exercise I just have to point out that you're missing a couple of boxes on the edges.

And about the rotated box which edges that I didn't draw boxes.

Those I ask you come from my sincerity. Help me plz.

7:48 AM, Sunday April 17th 2022

The ones that confuse me are for example 6 & 7, as well as 19 & 20. The boxes themselves are drawn correctly, but it looks as if they are going through each other in a way ( or maybe fused would make more sense). Just give them a bit of space next time you do the exercise.

Regarding the Rotated boxes, you only drew the box in the bottom right corner. Following this example, you should see what I'm implying here.

8:21 AM, Sunday April 17th 2022

Hi!

You're right about my rotated box. When I posted in Discord, I saw it why it's not balanced. Know I know it because of you. Thank you so much.

About the plotted perspective, I intended to draw them overlapping and then I hatched the front view. Doing that to ask someone to check if I did it right or wrong. What do you think about it?

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10:05 AM, Sunday April 17th 2022
edited at 10:12 AM, Apr 17th 2022

Congrats on completing Lesson 1.

It looks like you didn't always use the ruler in the superimposed lines exercise. Lines are generally smooth, and properly lined up at the start, but you’ll sometimes stress about their trajectory – don’t. The ghosted lines/planes are mostly confident. In the ghosted planes you could use the space better.

In the table of ellipses exercise and the ellipses in planes are some ellipses deformed and overlapped. You "draw through" and confident. You can rotate the page to better align the ellipses. The funnels look alright.

The plotted perspective exercise looks alright.

In the rough perspective exercise, only two pages required. The exercise looks alright. The lines are sometimes wobbly.

Nice job on the rotated boxes exercise.

In organic perspective exercise are the most boxes well done.

Maybe next time you could do a better job with the photost. It's best if page is aligned horizontal and vertically and photographed directly from above.

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edited at 10:12 AM, Apr 17th 2022
12:44 AM, Monday April 18th 2022

Hi!

Thank you for your comment.

I don't understand what you mean by this sentences. Plz explain to me more.

Maybe next time you could do a better job with the photost. It's best if page is aligned horizontal and vertically and photographed directly from above.

Have a nice day!

11:52 AM, Monday April 18th 2022

The quality of the pictures was not so good. When you take the picture, try to take it directly from above.

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